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#1
06-07-2012, 02:51 PM
Can I has more please!!! :3 besides the grammatical errors this was pretty damn good!
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06-08-2012, 01:53 AM
I see nothing wrong with this excellent intro except for the mood swing. But it's just a minor flaw though. Keep it up Kranesh!
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