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Armored Core: Resonance - Discussion Thread - illusion B* - 06-07-2012
Can I has more please!!! :3 besides the grammatical errors this was pretty damn good!
RE: Armored Core: Resonance, Chapter 1: Broken night. - Sirius140 - 06-08-2012
I see nothing wrong with this excellent intro except for the mood swing. But it's just a minor flaw though. Keep it up Kranesh!