Second Life Discussion thread

[HayWire]

This is the discussion thread for my fanfic
I decided to make it in poem form because I am sick
Of writing in narrative form of stories
So I wrote it this way to feel appease

I got the idea from school, from Florante at Laura
It says so in DA, it's very clear data.
The link to the fic is on the next stanza here
Second Life - in its RR premiere

[RoninFang]

Honestly haywire if you doing something because you like it then do it
don't stop doing what you like just because no one comments and such

"If I get enough good comments in RR or DA
I will continue this fanfic someday."

[Shintetsu]

What RF said. The first step is always the hardest in anything anyway. Continue developing this fic 'til it gets the attention of the people around you(because of it being epic/lulz/both), instead of being discouraged because of how the first step is making you feel.

That being said, I promise I'll read it later, there's something I have to do, then something to buy, then something to go to

[HayWire]

Not everyone is like everyone. Not everyone's the same
Just because I need support, am I to blame?
It's part of my personality I cannot change who I am.
I need support and answers in order to continue the program.

I find it selfish to run amuck to live for only me
I need to know if someone's against it or if I should say sorry.
No matter how I look at it...If someone objects what I do
I'll stop it for them because what's the point? I hate being hated and that's true.

It took me 15 years to gather my own courage to do something on my own
And up until now I'm still jittery about talking about it because I support it alone.
I can't handle things on my own, I need at least moral support.
Don't tell me that I don't need it because you're not me, you have no right to say anything of the sort.

I find that those people who do their goals standing on their own feet
Selfish and self-centered, living for no one else except themselves as if they think they're elite.
Just because I have a goal does not mean I'll do it straight away.
If someone doesn't like it and tells me a good reason why, then I'll be OK.

I don't care what you say, whether low-esteem, confidence or whatever.
Give support or take it away, just give me an answer if ever.
I need to know if I'm walking alone, in twos or in a group.
I don't want to get shot with my head held high, I'd rather get stepped on if I stoop.

[HayWire]

Fanfic has been updated, if anyone's going to read.
If there's one thing I have to say...it's longer indeed.

[Sforza]

Haven't read the fic, but nice poem