01-14-2007, 11:20 PM
Eloquently written and nicely detailed, your work shows a lot of promise.
I think i recognize elements of fantasy in your works. Have you read any of the Forgotten Realms books because "Branded" rather reminds of them.
You could break the paragraphs down into smaller ones if you like. They are easier to read that way but i think it would detract a little from your writing style if you do. Every writer has their own way of doing things and your's is a pretty fresh departure from what we currently have here.
Hope to see some AC-related works from you soon. Keep it up!
I think i recognize elements of fantasy in your works. Have you read any of the Forgotten Realms books because "Branded" rather reminds of them.
You could break the paragraphs down into smaller ones if you like. They are easier to read that way but i think it would detract a little from your writing style if you do. Every writer has their own way of doing things and your's is a pretty fresh departure from what we currently have here.
Hope to see some AC-related works from you soon. Keep it up!
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