Thinking of writing a fic...

[Serene]

Well, I've been writing stories in comic book script format since I was in highschool in preparation for my chosen course -fine arts- I was aiming to become a comic book artist, but I had to stop when my CPU's power supply gave out together with my monitor...

Here's the idea...
The idea is to fuze the first 3 generations in AC with a few other weapon and part ideas running around my mind...

The protagonist would be a guy, a mechanic who used to be a pilot for Amber Crown's Nest which is still functioning even after the fall of raven's ark...

His background: He joined the tournaments when he was 8 as a pupetter -a proxy pilot who controls AC's from a distance in place of the guy in the cockpit- but when their secret was discovered, he was banned fron the arena. He then focuses on his studies to take his attention away from piloting. He becomes a scientist for Kisaragi, and is in charge of a special project. After knowing that project's purpose, he escapes from the lab, and is now being hunted because of what he knows. He worked as a mechanic for an all girls team -who needed a lady mechanic- but later shows his abilites as a pilot and leads the team to victory...

Think Bit Cloud with the Blitz team...
It will be complicated, but I think the idea's pretty good...
This may work but I'm a little busy with other things right now.

Parts like Rifle Hanger Back Weapons will be there, Laser Blades may be equipped on either arm to add a little realism...

About the ladies, there will be a cute ninja wannabe, a trigger happy cowgirl and a conservative girl with suppressed killing instincts...
It'll be under the comedy action romance mecha genres...

Nakakaloko....
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CHARACTERS:
Anthony 'Nats' San Miguel
Race: Filipino
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 50kg
Blood Type: AB
Tag: Mood Breaker, in the arena: Hell Bringer

Record: W474 L11 D0
Class: Genocider
Arena Rank: A19
Range Preference: Melee to Close

AC: GenoKaiser
h11-queen 26110
c04-atlas 17110
cr-a72f 15220
cr-lh80s2 12115

cr-b72t 0802
g02-magnolia 091
r04-laurel 037

cr-i80bd
none
cr-75d
wb08pl-skylla ,cr-wb91lgl
wr22pl-ogre2, cr-wl95g
none, cr-wl79lb2

amino, o69es, o69ss, organelle, golgi, histon, o86r+, ribose, marishi

Nats' and Genokaiser's combination theme is 'Showing what you really are through your AC' and 'Every powerful design has its own major weakness' and is shown in GK's almost unusable weapon and FCS combination...

Genokaiser is the shortened form of Genocide Emperor, and is a Rebel AC, not Plus, but Rebel, which means GK becomes stronger through the story...


Cherry Katsura
Race: Japanese-American
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Height: 5'1"
Weight: 42kg
Blood Type: B
Tag: Self Proclaimed Kuno!-Ichi (as Nats calls her), in the arena: Yaiba no Hime

Record: W180 L5 D0
Class: Blader
Arena Rank: C12
Range Preference: Melee
AC: Triple Threat

Cherry is a huge Naruto fan since her early childhood. The show contributed a lot to her character, making her both cute and stupid at the same time...
She is often seen trying to immitate hand seals and techniques whenever she's alone. Unfortunately, she is not that well coordinated physically, but she has good timing skills and hand-eye cordination.

Triple Threat is a Ninja AC designed to simulate ninja skills... Like slashing, stealth, kawarimi no jutsu, shuriken throwing and even genjutsu.

Cherry and Triple Threat's combination theme is 'Doing what you can never do using your AC' and 'Imagination is only limited by the imaginator'...


Elaine Carter
Race: American
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 45kg
Blood Type: A
Tag: Man Hater (Nats teases her as a Man Eater), in the arena: Eisen Breaker

Record: W195 L3 D1
Class: Balanced
Arena Rank: B25
Range Preference: Close to Mid
AC: Ember Lace

Elaine's character is quite unpredictable, being moody at times, and nice at the same time. She sees herself as Cherry's elder sister and as Nats' rival.
It is said that she has suppressed abilities and a strong destructive Id.

Ember Lace has a prototype HumanPlusIII and is a joint design by Nats and Elie's father.
It is said that one time, Elie was knocked out while inside her AC during a mission , but Ember Lace kept on moving and destroyed all MT's [22] in less that 3 minutes and roars as she did.

Ellie and Ember Lace's combination theme is 'Hiding Abilities and Desires'.


Alice McJune
Race: American
Gender: Female
Age: 26
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 49kg
Blood Type: A
Tag: Alice, the Wild, in the Arena, Macality June [ha?]

Record: W195 L3 D1
Class: Shooter
Arena Rank: B22
Range Preference: Mid to Long
AC: Toy Soldier

Alice is naturally liberated, but is by contrast, conservative through her choice of words.

Toy Soldier, nicknamed Billy Boy by his pilot is equipped with revolver like handguns, a slug gun the right back weapon and a geryon2 for a left back weapon.

Toy Soldier's deign reflects Alice's skills greatly...

I'll edit in some more next time...

[Crimson]

This seems like it would work out well, cant wait to read a bit of it.

[strawhat_luffy]

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In other news, I would love to read something like this(of course, I love to read anything as long as it keeps me occupied ).

[Fox]

This sounds really good, can't wait for this idea to get off the flight deck....

Great idea, Serene. I hope you get to work on this one soon!

[Grim]

Cool... puppetmaster.

I'll be looking forward to this one as eagerly as I write my fics (which is to say, with a passion and attention to detail).

[Serene]

I'll finish character designs first.
Then the kind of [fuzed] technology used...
And how to combine all 5 generations + our own...

For now, I've completed Nats, the story's male protagonist...
His and His AC's theme is 'Showing what you really are through your AC' and 'Every powerful design has its own major weakness'

Genokaiser is the shortened form of Genocide Emperor, and is a Rebel AC, not Plus, but Rebel...

I'll edit in his description when I'm done...

[J.E_Magog]

i'd really like to read something in comic book form.

[Serene]

Syempre, you might be wondering why their recorded wins are over a hundred...

:THE WORLD:
With the Ark destroyed, the remaining ravens on earth under the slowly dying Progtech Company formed a new arena in Isaac City and named the new arena 'The Aviary'...

The Aviary slowly gained fame, and as time passed by, more ravens joined in for the fame and glory of the now known Hexagram of Isaac...

Now... Progtech did not plan on just creating a 'home' like this for the ravens for just goodwill, they had bigger plans for every one in the Aviary... As if they're going to war...

The Kisaragi, Mirage and Crest Corporations are present and supplies most of the parts in the story. Progtech only makes parts for their best ravens, some of which are remakes of their best weapons...

The Aviary's arena has 610 ravens and are divided into 7 Levels: Level E or trainees, usually aged 7 to 12 and fights only through simulators; Level D or juniors, aged 13 to 15. They now take a more direct training approach by using AC's but with a limited parts selection; Level C or freshmen, aged 16 and above. They now have a wider part selection; Levels A, B and S are almost the same, pilots are now allowed to have OP-I or Rebel in their AC's; EX Level is said to be the hardest to reach, so hard in fact that EX only has 10 ravens in its ranks...

:TECHNOLOGIES:
Progtech introduces a new type of weapon to its best ravens which uses the latest in their newly developed light particle technology.
There are 2 types: Charged Particles are the stronger type. Stable and powerful, not to mention has enough heat to reduce a target's armor density to half of what it was; Accelerated Particles are the faster but unstable type, but since the light particles on this one moves more rapidly than charged ones, it us much prefered for use in blades.

Some of Progtech's New Weapons:
GekkouYaiba - A Moonlight remake based on the PSX Era Moonlight
MidoriYaiba - An LS-3303 remake
Shiraki - A wppk Laser Rifle remake
KarasawaMx - A Karasawa remake, now has a railgun function.

More to come...
Now Working on my Prologue...

[Fox]

Whoa, that's one hell of a rich background you've set up there. You can usually tell how good a story is going to be just by looking at it's backstory.

Salivating in my seat over here. I want more!!

[Serene]

I have a title for it now...
Armored Core: Generation Cross
What do you think?

I'm also thinking of putting some of the guys here as Supporting characters...

[Crimson]

I like the title seems fitting, but everytime I read it I seem to wanna say "Cross Genesis" instead of "Generation Cross" lol, but thats just me

I did like the background alot as well, nice work.

[Serene]

Currently Temporarily On Hold...
Very Busy Catching up with Grades...

[Serene]

Ok...
I'm thinking of putting up one of my early works here...
For everyone's evaluation if I suck or soar...
Expect it anytime next week after a few revisions...