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- Serene - 01-01-2007 Well, I've been writing stories in comic book script format since I was in highschool in preparation for my chosen course -fine arts- I was aiming to become a comic book artist, but I had to stop when my CPU's power supply gave out together with my monitor... Here's the idea... The idea is to fuze the first 3 generations in AC with a few other weapon and part ideas running around my mind... The protagonist would be a guy, a mechanic who used to be a pilot for Amber Crown's Nest which is still functioning even after the fall of raven's ark... His background: He joined the tournaments when he was 8 as a pupetter -a proxy pilot who controls AC's from a distance in place of the guy in the cockpit- but when their secret was discovered, he was banned fron the arena. He then focuses on his studies to take his attention away from piloting. He becomes a scientist for Kisaragi, and is in charge of a special project. After knowing that project's purpose, he escapes from the lab, and is now being hunted because of what he knows. He worked as a mechanic for an all girls team -who needed a lady mechanic- but later shows his abilites as a pilot and leads the team to victory... Think Bit Cloud with the Blitz team... It will be complicated, but I think the idea's pretty good... This may work but I'm a little busy with other things right now. Parts like Rifle Hanger Back Weapons will be there, Laser Blades may be equipped on either arm to add a little realism... About the ladies, there will be a cute ninja wannabe, a trigger happy cowgirl and a conservative girl with suppressed killing instincts... It'll be under the comedy action romance mecha genres... Nakakaloko.... -------------------------------------------------- CHARACTERS: Anthony 'Nats' San Miguel Race: Filipino Gender: Male Age: 24 Height: 5'7" Weight: 50kg Blood Type: AB Tag: Mood Breaker, in the arena: Hell Bringer Record: W474 L11 D0 Class: Genocider Arena Rank: A19 Range Preference: Melee to Close AC: GenoKaiser h11-queen 26110 c04-atlas 17110 cr-a72f 15220 cr-lh80s2 12115 cr-b72t 0802 g02-magnolia 091 r04-laurel 037 cr-i80bd none cr-75d wb08pl-skylla ,cr-wb91lgl wr22pl-ogre2, cr-wl95g none, cr-wl79lb2 amino, o69es, o69ss, organelle, golgi, histon, o86r+, ribose, marishi Nats' and Genokaiser's combination theme is 'Showing what you really are through your AC' and 'Every powerful design has its own major weakness' and is shown in GK's almost unusable weapon and FCS combination... Genokaiser is the shortened form of Genocide Emperor, and is a Rebel AC, not Plus, but Rebel, which means GK becomes stronger through the story... Cherry Katsura Race: Japanese-American Gender: Female Age: 16 Height: 5'1" Weight: 42kg Blood Type: B Tag: Self Proclaimed Kuno!-Ichi (as Nats calls her), in the arena: Yaiba no Hime Record: W180 L5 D0 Class: Blader Arena Rank: C12 Range Preference: Melee AC: Triple Threat Cherry is a huge Naruto fan since her early childhood. The show contributed a lot to her character, making her both cute and stupid at the same time... She is often seen trying to immitate hand seals and techniques whenever she's alone. Unfortunately, she is not that well coordinated physically, but she has good timing skills and hand-eye cordination. Triple Threat is a Ninja AC designed to simulate ninja skills... Like slashing, stealth, kawarimi no jutsu, shuriken throwing and even genjutsu. Cherry and Triple Threat's combination theme is 'Doing what you can never do using your AC' and 'Imagination is only limited by the imaginator'... Elaine Carter Race: American Gender: Female Age: 23 Height: 5'6" Weight: 45kg Blood Type: A Tag: Man Hater (Nats teases her as a Man Eater), in the arena: Eisen Breaker Record: W195 L3 D1 Class: Balanced Arena Rank: B25 Range Preference: Close to Mid AC: Ember Lace Elaine's character is quite unpredictable, being moody at times, and nice at the same time. She sees herself as Cherry's elder sister and as Nats' rival. It is said that she has suppressed abilities and a strong destructive Id. Ember Lace has a prototype HumanPlusIII and is a joint design by Nats and Elie's father. It is said that one time, Elie was knocked out while inside her AC during a mission , but Ember Lace kept on moving and destroyed all MT's [22] in less that 3 minutes and roars as she did. Ellie and Ember Lace's combination theme is 'Hiding Abilities and Desires'. Alice McJune Race: American Gender: Female Age: 26 Height: 5'7" Weight: 49kg Blood Type: A Tag: Alice, the Wild, in the Arena, Macality June [ha?] Record: W195 L3 D1 Class: Shooter Arena Rank: B22 Range Preference: Mid to Long AC: Toy Soldier Alice is naturally liberated, but is by contrast, conservative through her choice of words. Toy Soldier, nicknamed Billy Boy by his pilot is equipped with revolver like handguns, a slug gun the right back weapon and a geryon2 for a left back weapon. Toy Soldier's deign reflects Alice's skills greatly... I'll edit in some more next time... - Crimson - 01-02-2007 This seems like it would work out well, cant wait to read a bit of it. - strawhat_luffy - 01-02-2007 <!--QuoteBegin-Serene+Jan 1 2007, 07:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Serene @ Jan 1 2007, 07:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> About the ladies, there will be a cute ninja wannabe, a trigger happy cowgirl and a conservative girl with suppressed killing instincts...[/quote:925c47dc76] In other news, I would love to read something like this(of course, I love to read anything as long as it keeps me occupied ). - Fox - 01-02-2007 This sounds really good, can't wait for this idea to get off the flight deck.... Great idea, Serene. I hope you get to work on this one soon! - Grim - 01-03-2007 Cool... puppetmaster. I'll be looking forward to this one as eagerly as I write my fics (which is to say, with a passion and attention to detail). - Serene - 01-04-2007 I'll finish character designs first. Then the kind of [fuzed] technology used... And how to combine all 5 generations + our own... For now, I've completed Nats, the story's male protagonist... His and His AC's theme is 'Showing what you really are through your AC' and 'Every powerful design has its own major weakness' Genokaiser is the shortened form of Genocide Emperor, and is a Rebel AC, not Plus, but Rebel... I'll edit in his description when I'm done... - J.E_Magog - 01-04-2007 i'd really like to read something in comic book form. - Serene - 01-05-2007 Syempre, you might be wondering why their recorded wins are over a hundred... :THE WORLD: With the Ark destroyed, the remaining ravens on earth under the slowly dying Progtech Company formed a new arena in Isaac City and named the new arena 'The Aviary'... The Aviary slowly gained fame, and as time passed by, more ravens joined in for the fame and glory of the now known Hexagram of Isaac... Now... Progtech did not plan on just creating a 'home' like this for the ravens for just goodwill, they had bigger plans for every one in the Aviary... As if they're going to war... The Kisaragi, Mirage and Crest Corporations are present and supplies most of the parts in the story. Progtech only makes parts for their best ravens, some of which are remakes of their best weapons... The Aviary's arena has 610 ravens and are divided into 7 Levels: Level E or trainees, usually aged 7 to 12 and fights only through simulators; Level D or juniors, aged 13 to 15. They now take a more direct training approach by using AC's but with a limited parts selection; Level C or freshmen, aged 16 and above. They now have a wider part selection; Levels A, B and S are almost the same, pilots are now allowed to have OP-I or Rebel in their AC's; EX Level is said to be the hardest to reach, so hard in fact that EX only has 10 ravens in its ranks... :TECHNOLOGIES: Progtech introduces a new type of weapon to its best ravens which uses the latest in their newly developed light particle technology. There are 2 types: Charged Particles are the stronger type. Stable and powerful, not to mention has enough heat to reduce a target's armor density to half of what it was; Accelerated Particles are the faster but unstable type, but since the light particles on this one moves more rapidly than charged ones, it us much prefered for use in blades. Some of Progtech's New Weapons: GekkouYaiba - A Moonlight remake based on the PSX Era Moonlight MidoriYaiba - An LS-3303 remake Shiraki - A wppk Laser Rifle remake KarasawaMx - A Karasawa remake, now has a railgun function. More to come... Now Working on my Prologue... - Fox - 01-06-2007 Whoa, that's one hell of a rich background you've set up there. You can usually tell how good a story is going to be just by looking at it's backstory. Salivating in my seat over here. I want more!! - Serene - 01-09-2007 I have a title for it now... Armored Core: Generation Cross What do you think? I'm also thinking of putting some of the guys here as Supporting characters... - Crimson - 01-09-2007 I like the title seems fitting, but everytime I read it I seem to wanna say "Cross Genesis" instead of "Generation Cross" lol, but thats just me I did like the background alot as well, nice work. - Serene - 01-23-2007 Currently Temporarily On Hold... Very Busy Catching up with Grades... - Serene - 04-16-2007 Ok... I'm thinking of putting up one of my early works here... For everyone's evaluation if I suck or soar... Expect it anytime next week after a few revisions...