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The Color of Freedom Discussion
#1
Alright, so here's where you guys roast me. Tongue

I'm going to place a link to this topic on the title of every chapter I write. Yeah, it's a bit weird putting the link to discussion first before the actual body of the text, but it'll make things a bit cleaner to look at.

The long-delayed prologue is finally up. Comment away.
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#2
Awesome intro dude. Realistically done and very detailed. Now we get to see how the near-future human civilization turns into the almost-post-apocalyptic AC world.

Can't wait to see the first chapter.
"May those who accept their fate find happiness. May those who defy their fate find glory."
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#3
I really, really liked it. Very nice writing on your part and an intriguing plot behind it.

No complaints from me.
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#4
so thats your take on how the GD started? I liked it. Can't wait to read the next chaps.
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#5
Thanks guys. Will start on teh first chapter soon.
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#6
Interesting plot you've got there. Its not your average straight-to-the-action fanfic.

I'll be expecting this to be a good one Shades
I hate the way you talk to me. And the way you cut your hair.
I hate the way you drive my car. I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots And the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick — It even makes me rhyme.
I hate the way you're always right. I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh — Even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it that you're not around. And the fact that you didn't call.
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you — Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.
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#7
I'm resuming work on the fic.
And I think I might include illustrations. Ninja
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#8
Hey, can I draw some of your illustrations too?? Big grin
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#9
R.Leonhardt Wrote:Hey, can I draw some of your illustrations too?? Big grin

Why not? I'll mail you some of the chapters before I put them up. Try not to take too long though, or I'll make the illustrations myself.
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