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08-17-2011, 10:38 AM
(08-16-2011, 03:28 PM)Serene Wrote:
(08-16-2011, 02:10 PM)zero_kanipan Wrote: yup. they're not very good tho XD

A kid's gonna read it so it's fine. This'll look better with drawings.

actually the target audience isnt children. its only written that way ^^U so yeah it fails hahaha
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RE: zero's stories - feedback thread - by Serene - 08-16-2011, 12:18 PM
RE: zero's stories - feedback thread - by Serene - 08-16-2011, 03:28 PM
RE: zero's stories - feedback thread - by zero_kanipan - 08-17-2011, 10:38 AM

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