Fox's fanfics

[Crimson]

Ive only read Wings of Tomorrow and I am very impressed. Ive been reading fics for a while now (on ACO) and yours is very good.

Im too lazy to give a chapter by chapter deal (lol), so I will just leave it at that, but i will say...I DEMAND MORE CHAPTERS :]

[Fox]

Thanks for the compliments Crimson. Just hope you like reading long fics because Wings might take a while to finish.

Hey, Strawhat, nice work on the fic. You might wanna make a thread of your own where we could post our comments about your work.

Chapter 15 is up. Sorry but my pre-reader took his sweet time betaing that installment. If you wanna find out what happened to Hitomi, get off this page and head to the fic itself.

Next chapter will be up by thursday (hopefully ).

[Crimson]

Im cool with reading long fics because Azure Knight on ACO has 3 books for his Shattered Heaven series and each book consisted of like 20-30 chapters and ive read each and every one lol.

Go as long as you want to Fox, ill stay posted

EDIT:

I finished reading chapter 15, and it was good stuff. That fight didnt turn out the way I expected it too and the what was said when Hitomi was cleaning his wounds was very funny. I wait to see what you will post up next.

[Fox]

Chapter 16 might take until Saturday to post. I was writing the last parts when i realized some mistakes i had made. Back to square one (or actually, page three.) Plus, i hadn't noticed it but the entire chapter had hit more than 20 pages, my longest yet. U'm still thinking whether to split it into two or keep it as a whole.

Stay tuned.

[Fox]

Chapters 16 and 17 are up. Originally, Chapter 17 was part of Chapter 16 but i realized that it was far too long. I type in 12-font Arial and the total pages of 16 reached 31 so i chopped it into two.

Chapter 17 may be a bit long-winded but i felt that i hasd to set things up to set the mood for Chapter 18 (which is halfway done by now) and Chapter 19. Those of you dissapointed by the lack of "action" in Chapter 12 (you know what i mean), should be happy with what i've got in store.

BTW, 17's got a bit of a lime scene in it. It's not who you think, though.

[Crimson]

The 2 chapters were good although I couldve did without Jaden "pleasuring himself"

The drunk seen was funny so I must applaud you on your efforts

[strawhat_luffy]

this fic needs more drunk Jaden. lol, good going Fox. I can't wait to read the next chaps.

[Lunar]

I just finished reading the new chapters. They're okay but not as good as some of the previous ones. I'll just do it like before and do it by chapter.

Chapter 15: Wow, I never expected the encounter to end that way. I was so sure that Jaden would have just killed the cat with his rifle but I didn't count on him actually having to go up against it like that. I find it funny that Hitomi can be so caring and annoying at the same time. Haha, Of course, after the hero saves the girl, the girl has to patch up the hero. It was funny how Hitomi helped Jaden wash the cat's blood off. Then the ending was okay, not on par with chapter 7 or 11 but still good.

Chapter 16: I don't get it. Until now, Hitomi is still unsure whether she loves or doesn't love Jaden? Then what was all that kissing and flirting for? Is she that unused to love that she can't tell how she really feels? Silly girl. Other than that, it's good that they finally found a little slice of paradise. I'm guessing that they'll be getting in contact with the Ravens soon enough now that they've found a base. Things are finally looking up. I'm also touched by how attached Hitomi has gotten to Jaden in that she doesn't want him to go anywhere without her. She may not like being weak but she sure can show her vulnerable side very easily.

Chapter 17: This wasn't in the original plans, was it? This chapter was a little boring at a few points but it turned out good in the end. Awwww, their first date. Dancing, dinner then a make-out session? What a classic way to really further their relationship. And they actually slept in a bed together? How come I'm having visions of how the following chapter is gonna be . You did post previously the titles of the upcoming chapters and "Playing with fire" looks like it's gonna be a hot one (pun intended). Not to sound like Necron, but I'm really gonna be waiting for the next installment. Innuendo aside, I really, really liked the way you ended this chapter. It was just so sweet and touching. Very nice.

Oh yeah, good job on advertising the beer, haha! A drunken Raven is an unusual thing indeed.


Something's bothering me, though. They've been together for almost two years. They've developed feelings for each other, kiss each other all the time and hold hands wherever they go. They even sleep together at night for crying out loud! I just can't believe that they still haven't said ILY to each other yet. Is there some kind of plot twist you're planning or is it just another plot device to keep things interesting? I better hear them confess their feelings to each other in the next few chapters.

Nice going, Fox. Keep it up! Oh, and don't worry, I'm finishing up that LH fic I told you about.

Ja Ne!

[Fox]

Thanks for the comments guys. Much appreciated. Sorry though, that's the last for now that we'll see a drunk Jaden. The next time we see him hitting the drinks will be a long way in Book 3.

Chapter 18 is up. Had it finished late last night and good thing it was betaed pretty fast.

Warning though: the first half is pure dialogue while the other half is a lemon scene. This time it'll be proper "action" as the two move their relationship to the next level.

Don't say i didn't warn you. Happy reading.

[Crimson]

Wow...just wow, that was great. The sexual tension, the arguments, everything was on point. I thought they were about to do it lol.

I was chanting in my head: "Go Jaden, Go Jaden" then he said those words at the end and I was like..."Aww..."

Always gotta leave us wanting more dont you?

Good stuff, cant wait for the next chapter.

[Fox]

Hehehe, cliffhangers are a good way to keep people coming back for more, don't ya think?

Next chapter might be up sometime just before Christmas day. I'm still not sure how to continue the fic (or Chapter 19) for now so i'll hafta rack my brain for ideas.

Any suggestions?

[Fox]

All the mushiness in Wings is kinda tiring me out. I've been meaning to do another action/adventure type of story but i'm also fresh out of AC ideas.

Instead, i did something else.

Fireflies in Summer is a fic based from the classic series Robotech. This one is set during the first arc of the show, the Macross Saga. It's set during the episode "Farewell, Big Brother" and primarily focuses the first battle of Max Sterling and Miriya Parino.

I tried getting the dialogue as close as i can to the series although i did add several lines, as well as a few new scenes.

Depending on whether how lazy i am, this might grow into a series of one-shots based on certain episodes from the series.

Happy reading.

[Fox]

Blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked, blocked!!!

Damnit! Earlier, i found myself sitting in front of a screen that hasnt had anything typed into it for over two hours!

AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

Ever find yourself in a situation wherein your brain can't come up with anything to say? Wherein it absolutely refuses to let the creative juices flowing? Wherein it doesn't want to follow your commands?

No?

Not even once?

Then pray it doesn't happen to you? Schiest, i feel so worthless right now.

Chapter 19 will be on hold until tomorrow. Right now, i've gotta go cool myself off.

Fox out....

[Necron]

Writer's block? That's too bad.

Ok, I read the last 5 chapters a couple of days ago but could only bring myself to write a review only now. I see that the story has now taken some rather interesting turns. An emotionally heart-rending reunion, an animal attack, finding shelter, their first date then failure to launch? You

[Lunar]

I was dismayed at how chapter 18 turned out. Everything was great but I was still dismayed.

Not with Jaden's decision not to continue. No, that was a wise move on his part. His views of love and sex are admirable and shows a good deal about his character and morality. It's actually refreshing to see a guy who doesn't jump at the chance for sex. I say that Jaden did the right thing, given the circumstances.

What I'm dismayed at was Hitomi's overly casual attitude and immature actions in that chapter. I'd have thought she'd be able to control her desire better, but considering she's just out of her teens and still unsure about her feelings for Jaden, I'll hold my tongue for now and see what happens next.

It looks like there'll be some rough sailing for our two heroes in the next chapter. Nice going on this one, Fox. I really thought they were going to do "It" but i breathed out a sigh of relief at the end. Unlike two certain people, I'm glad that the ending turned out like that.

Fireflies in Summer was a nice piece of work, by the way. Max and Miriya really are a perfect match. If you do expand the fic and turn it into a series, could you make the next one a Rick/Lisa pairing? I'm just so hooked on the angsty relationship they have.

Ja Ne!