i need your comments :3

[iraya-sama]

i think her drawing are good!!!!

Pro tip: the space between the eyes should be one eye like in smiley faces
but overall your anatomy is good
i dont follow too many guideline i just think of drawing girls as drawing sausages-- kinda roundish and filled with soft curves --these apply to men too, only the main body is kinda boxy but the rest are sausages..

sexy delicious sausages.....

*ehem*
id also like to say that you drew your characters legs and feet very beautifully. you have a certain artstyle that you should follow on and styalize more.
your eyes are very pretty, it doesent have to be always inlined, what ever makes it prettier, then do it.

also her breasts-- try to look for how to draw breasts on the internet, like porn and stuff. XD