Thx Grim.
I thought I did throw in a few weaknesses, but I guess I was being a little too subtle with it. I do have it planned for Jason to have more difficulty in battle, just haven't gotten around to writing out the chapters yet.
This is my first fanfic so I figured I would dwell on in hopes of being descriptive...I just did it in the wrong place. Where do you think I should be more descriptive? I feel I am pretty descriptive in the battle sequences or am I wrong?
What else do you feel I should improve on? I can take critical analysis as long as people are ultimately trying to help, you know?
Also, how long should i make this fanfic go? 10-15 chapters? 15-20? This would help me know what details to cut out and what not.
I thought I did throw in a few weaknesses, but I guess I was being a little too subtle with it. I do have it planned for Jason to have more difficulty in battle, just haven't gotten around to writing out the chapters yet.
This is my first fanfic so I figured I would dwell on in hopes of being descriptive...I just did it in the wrong place. Where do you think I should be more descriptive? I feel I am pretty descriptive in the battle sequences or am I wrong?
What else do you feel I should improve on? I can take critical analysis as long as people are ultimately trying to help, you know?
Also, how long should i make this fanfic go? 10-15 chapters? 15-20? This would help me know what details to cut out and what not.
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