10-17-2007, 10:42 PM
I can understand you if you aren't familiar with the Zoids world, not many people are. It is based post Royal Cup, where Bit beat the Berserk Fury. Many things have transpired since, like switching of team members, Brad with Naomi and Brad to the Blitz Team (once with Naomi).
I should have made a prolouge, but it is ok. I may come back to it later.
Yea...typos...I actually updated the first chapter, so I will put it up soon, along with chapter 2.
From now on, the story will be 3rd person. It will flow better imo.
I should have made a prolouge, but it is ok. I may come back to it later.
Yea...typos...I actually updated the first chapter, so I will put it up soon, along with chapter 2.
From now on, the story will be 3rd person. It will flow better imo.
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