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10-17-2007, 01:21 PM
Look who's back!

Good chapter, there was a flow in the movement of the narrative. Story-wise, well I'm not real familiar with the Zoid world, but yeah I can imagine how it would go from what I've seen on Cartoon Network.

Be sure to proofread your chapters though, there are a few typos in there. Otherwise, cool.
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Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 10-16-2007, 10:51 PM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Grim - 10-17-2007, 01:21 PM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 10-17-2007, 10:42 PM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 10-18-2007, 04:52 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 10-20-2007, 06:04 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 10-24-2007, 09:07 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by clonezero - 10-24-2007, 09:46 PM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 10-28-2007, 05:25 PM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Grim - 10-28-2007, 05:58 PM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 10-29-2007, 01:18 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Grim - 10-29-2007, 06:21 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 10-30-2007, 09:36 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Grim - 10-31-2007, 08:10 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 11-02-2007, 07:21 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 11-08-2007, 08:22 PM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by NiX - 11-08-2007, 08:38 PM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 11-09-2007, 02:25 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 11-15-2007, 11:41 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 11-21-2007, 09:55 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 12-04-2007, 01:12 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Grim - 12-04-2007, 04:58 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 12-26-2007, 12:11 PM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 01-28-2008, 12:52 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Ravenick - 02-02-2008, 06:41 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 03-07-2008, 04:53 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Grim - 03-27-2008, 11:07 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 05-12-2008, 08:28 PM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Grim - 05-13-2008, 06:47 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Crimson - 07-27-2008, 05:25 AM
RE: Fangs of a Zaber - Discussion - by Grim - 07-27-2008, 08:51 AM

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