05-23-2007, 05:35 PM
Now that's what I call a good prologue. And the idiot is back writing fics. Yeah!
This one reads a little darker than some of your previous writings. Is that date right? Coz the language used is strange, enough that I don't understand some of the terms used. Hey, it's all good though.
The Inferno? I remember that book. We used that as a book report back in middle school. Now that's a cool opener. Quite a departure from all those rock lyrics you used before.
Nice work, Fox, I'll be waiting for the next chaps of this one.
This one reads a little darker than some of your previous writings. Is that date right? Coz the language used is strange, enough that I don't understand some of the terms used. Hey, it's all good though.
The Inferno? I remember that book. We used that as a book report back in middle school. Now that's a cool opener. Quite a departure from all those rock lyrics you used before.
Nice work, Fox, I'll be waiting for the next chaps of this one.
I hate the way you talk to me. And the way you cut your hair.
I hate the way you drive my car. I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots And the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick — It even makes me rhyme.
I hate the way you're always right. I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh — Even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it that you're not around. And the fact that you didn't call.
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you — Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.
I hate the way you drive my car. I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots And the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick — It even makes me rhyme.
I hate the way you're always right. I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh — Even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it that you're not around. And the fact that you didn't call.
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you — Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.