03-13-2007, 06:48 PM
Your writings have this creepy, gothic vibe to them that I really enjoyed. With the amount of detail in the first two chapters, I would've been lost if the backstory hadn't helped out. Very good if I say so.
Hey, I've no problems with protagonists like that. Anti-heroes like Etienne are way more interesting than the generic cookie-cutter types. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.
Hey, I've no problems with protagonists like that. Anti-heroes like Etienne are way more interesting than the generic cookie-cutter types. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.
<span style='color
ed'><span style='font-family
ptima'>This world is one of sadness. Battle brings death. Death brings sorrow. The living... may not hear them. Their voices... may fall upon deaf ears. But make no mistake... the dead... are not silent. Now you will know the sorrow of those whose lives you have ended... <br>-The Sorrow, Metal Gear Solid 3</span></span>
ed'><span style='font-familyptima'>This world is one of sadness. Battle brings death. Death brings sorrow. The living... may not hear them. Their voices... may fall upon deaf ears. But make no mistake... the dead... are not silent. Now you will know the sorrow of those whose lives you have ended... <br>-The Sorrow, Metal Gear Solid 3</span></span>
