01-24-2007, 02:13 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Lunar+Dec 23 2006, 08:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Lunar @ Dec 23 2006, 08:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Unlike two certain people, I'm glad that the ending turned out like that. [/quote:8d17a43499]
I won't object to this one coz I really was dissapointed at those last words. Hey, don't get me wrong, characters in fanfics usually admit their love for each other after sex and I was expecting them to say the words afterwards, not "I'm sorry, I can't".
Okay, chap.20 was great. Kudos to you for keeping Jaden's skin intact. I expected Hitomi to beat him to a bloody pulp after the rejection. Haha, at least they got through that episode without Jaden getting his ass handed to him by the redhead.
Nice bit about the constellations by the way. Way cool!
Damn, it's almost a month ever since the last installment. So how will the upcoming AC vs Pulverizer fight turn out? It's about time we got some heavy-metal action in this fic again. The romance is good but please don't forget that this is an AC fanfic, so make the next chapter a good one.
I won't object to this one coz I really was dissapointed at those last words. Hey, don't get me wrong, characters in fanfics usually admit their love for each other after sex and I was expecting them to say the words afterwards, not "I'm sorry, I can't".
Okay, chap.20 was great. Kudos to you for keeping Jaden's skin intact. I expected Hitomi to beat him to a bloody pulp after the rejection. Haha, at least they got through that episode without Jaden getting his ass handed to him by the redhead.
Nice bit about the constellations by the way. Way cool!
Damn, it's almost a month ever since the last installment. So how will the upcoming AC vs Pulverizer fight turn out? It's about time we got some heavy-metal action in this fic again. The romance is good but please don't forget that this is an AC fanfic, so make the next chapter a good one.
<span style='colored'><span style='font-familyptima'>This world is one of sadness. Battle brings death. Death brings sorrow. The living... may not hear them. Their voices... may fall upon deaf ears. But make no mistake... the dead... are not silent. Now you will know the sorrow of those whose lives you have ended... <br>-The Sorrow, Metal Gear Solid 3</span></span>