12-19-2006, 07:23 AM
Wow...just wow, that was great. The sexual tension, the arguments, everything was on point. I thought they were about to do it lol.
I was chanting in my head: "Go Jaden, Go Jaden" then he said those words at the end and I was like..."Aww..."
Always gotta leave us wanting more dont you?
Good stuff, cant wait for the next chapter.
I was chanting in my head: "Go Jaden, Go Jaden" then he said those words at the end and I was like..."Aww..."
Always gotta leave us wanting more dont you?
Good stuff, cant wait for the next chapter.
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