12-01-2006, 11:39 PM
Why not? That's an interesting idea but i haven't written anything in the last 2 years. I could serve as a proofreader or pre-reader/adviser though, if Fox will let me. For now i'm reading his fics.
I've finished The Last Stand and Komm Susser Tod, good work on both of them.
I'm currently reading Fox's Wings of Tomorrow. I confess that it's not at all what i expected it to be although it is rather well-written. The interaction between Jaden and Hitomi is very intriguing, a nice boy-meets-girl type of story.
I've just finished chapter 8. Oh my, that kiss was soooo nakakakilig
I've noticed the lyric inserts at the beginnings of the chapters and i realize that the story is part-songfic. Those lyrics are rather well-chosen and pertinent to the chapter they've been added to.
I won't post a review until i finish the rest of the available chapters. I want to do them in one shot but Fox, i'll say for now that you're doing one hell of a job. You're work is a cut above what i've done in the past.
Catch ya for the next installments.
Ja ne!
I've finished The Last Stand and Komm Susser Tod, good work on both of them.
I'm currently reading Fox's Wings of Tomorrow. I confess that it's not at all what i expected it to be although it is rather well-written. The interaction between Jaden and Hitomi is very intriguing, a nice boy-meets-girl type of story.
I've just finished chapter 8. Oh my, that kiss was soooo nakakakilig
I've noticed the lyric inserts at the beginnings of the chapters and i realize that the story is part-songfic. Those lyrics are rather well-chosen and pertinent to the chapter they've been added to.
I won't post a review until i finish the rest of the available chapters. I want to do them in one shot but Fox, i'll say for now that you're doing one hell of a job. You're work is a cut above what i've done in the past.
Catch ya for the next installments.
Ja ne!
I hate the way you talk to me. And the way you cut your hair.
I hate the way you drive my car. I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots And the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick — It even makes me rhyme.
I hate the way you're always right. I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh — Even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it that you're not around. And the fact that you didn't call.
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you — Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.
I hate the way you drive my car. I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots And the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick — It even makes me rhyme.
I hate the way you're always right. I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh — Even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it that you're not around. And the fact that you didn't call.
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you — Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.
