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Fox's fanfics
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After reading the pinned fic, i have some questions

1. Grimlok's right, Hitomi seems to be similar to Asuka Langley Soryu. From the red hair and her superiority complex down to her attitude during the earlier chapters, she reminds me of the Second Child. Is this coincidental or intentional?

2. The AC world seems strangely low-tech for a story set in the future. How come there was a sporting-goods store in the city in chapter 3 and the equipment the two protagonists are lugging around seems to be regular camping gear from the 20th century. Other things point out to low-tech stuff like when Hitomi said her mother drove her car off a cliff, Jaden and Hitomi going to school, the can opener in chapter 9 and other stuff. Are any of these things supposed to be in the AC world?

3. You mentioned in chapter 1 that Hitomi's Seraphim AC is built around a U5 core yet the story is set just before the end of Nexus. Wasn't the U5 introduced in Last Raven? And why did the Hitomi's U5 have an Overboost function when its supposed to be a normal core?

No offense meant but i'm just a little confused about the irregularities. Happy
<span style='colorWhistleed'><span style='font-familyOhmyptima'>This world is one of sadness. Battle brings death. Death brings sorrow. The living... may not hear them. Their voices... may fall upon deaf ears. But make no mistake... the dead... are not silent. Now you will know the sorrow of those whose lives you have ended... <br>-The Sorrow, Metal Gear Solid 3</span></span>
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[No subject] - by Fox - 10-11-2006, 08:39 PM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by strawhat_luffy - 10-07-2007, 03:26 AM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by Lunar - 01-19-2008, 11:27 AM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by clonezero - 01-19-2008, 07:13 PM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by strawhat_luffy - 01-20-2008, 03:56 AM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by Fox - 01-20-2008, 09:27 AM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by Lunar - 01-21-2008, 01:08 PM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by Serene - 01-22-2008, 05:42 AM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by Fox - 01-23-2008, 04:51 AM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by Goat - 01-24-2008, 07:12 PM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by clonezero - 06-28-2009, 10:14 PM
[No subject] - by Necron - 10-12-2006, 12:51 AM
[No subject] - by Grim - 10-12-2006, 11:28 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 10-12-2006, 06:48 PM
[No subject] - by Necron - 10-13-2006, 04:33 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 10-13-2006, 11:59 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 10-23-2006, 11:29 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 10-24-2006, 04:13 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 10-27-2006, 01:40 PM
[No subject] - by Necron - 11-03-2006, 10:47 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 11-06-2006, 09:48 PM
[No subject] - by Necron - 11-18-2006, 12:02 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 11-22-2006, 11:03 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 11-22-2006, 11:17 PM
[No subject] - by Necron - 11-28-2006, 09:36 AM
[No subject] - by Grim - 11-28-2006, 10:07 AM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 11-30-2006, 06:55 AM
[No subject] - by Necron - 12-01-2006, 12:52 PM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 12-01-2006, 11:39 PM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 12-02-2006, 12:20 PM
[No subject] - by Grim - 12-02-2006, 02:00 PM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 12-02-2006, 08:10 PM
[No subject] - by Doom Trigger - 12-02-2006, 08:26 PM
[No subject] - by Necron - 12-03-2006, 10:58 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-03-2006, 02:14 PM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 12-03-2006, 02:53 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-04-2006, 05:01 PM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 12-05-2006, 07:42 AM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 12-08-2006, 10:57 AM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 12-11-2006, 06:59 AM
[No subject] - by Crimson - 12-11-2006, 08:46 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-11-2006, 11:58 PM
[No subject] - by Crimson - 12-12-2006, 12:32 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-14-2006, 06:54 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-17-2006, 02:09 PM
[No subject] - by Crimson - 12-18-2006, 05:44 AM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 12-18-2006, 07:13 AM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 12-18-2006, 04:13 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-18-2006, 11:21 PM
[No subject] - by Crimson - 12-19-2006, 07:23 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-19-2006, 09:19 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-20-2006, 06:10 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-22-2006, 04:50 PM
[No subject] - by Necron - 12-23-2006, 12:53 AM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 12-23-2006, 08:02 PM
[No subject] - by Crimson - 12-23-2006, 11:17 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-24-2006, 05:23 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 12-27-2006, 07:55 AM
[No subject] - by Crimson - 12-27-2006, 03:17 PM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 12-28-2006, 02:25 AM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 12-30-2006, 02:16 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 01-03-2007, 12:19 AM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 01-12-2007, 04:23 PM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 01-13-2007, 07:19 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 01-14-2007, 11:21 PM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 01-15-2007, 12:56 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 01-18-2007, 10:48 AM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 01-19-2007, 07:19 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 01-21-2007, 03:15 PM
[No subject] - by Necron - 01-24-2007, 02:13 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 01-25-2007, 10:41 AM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 01-26-2007, 10:24 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 01-26-2007, 11:13 AM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 01-26-2007, 03:43 PM
[No subject] - by Grim - 01-26-2007, 10:11 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 01-28-2007, 05:58 PM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 02-08-2007, 01:44 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 02-16-2007, 01:01 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 02-16-2007, 01:05 PM
[No subject] - by Crimson - 02-20-2007, 09:33 AM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 02-23-2007, 09:08 AM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 02-23-2007, 08:07 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 02-23-2007, 08:53 PM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 02-26-2007, 08:33 PM
[No subject] - by R.Leonhardt - 02-26-2007, 09:21 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 02-26-2007, 11:23 PM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 03-06-2007, 11:34 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 03-08-2007, 04:42 PM
[No subject] - by Necron - 03-13-2007, 07:14 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 03-14-2007, 10:19 AM
[No subject] - by Chaos - 03-18-2007, 10:01 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 03-21-2007, 03:50 PM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 03-24-2007, 10:06 PM
[No subject] - by clonezero - 03-26-2007, 07:25 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 03-27-2007, 04:30 PM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 03-27-2007, 11:03 PM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 03-28-2007, 03:30 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 03-29-2007, 05:22 PM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 03-31-2007, 08:56 PM
[No subject] - by strawhat_luffy - 04-01-2007, 07:28 AM
[No subject] - by Goat - 04-01-2007, 10:01 AM
[No subject] - by Fox - 04-01-2007, 11:49 AM
RE: Fox's fanfics - by Necron - 04-08-2007, 05:15 PM
[No subject] - by Lunar - 04-08-2007, 09:36 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 04-09-2007, 12:20 PM
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[No subject] - by Grim - 04-10-2007, 11:22 PM
[No subject] - by Fox - 04-11-2007, 12:36 AM
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[No subject] - by Fox - 05-18-2007, 08:33 PM
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