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<!--QuoteBegin-Lunar+Feb 26 2007, 08:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td> QUOTE (Lunar @ Feb 26 2007, 08:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Does that mean that we'll have to go through the entire fic again? Man, you do like giving us a hard time, don't ya? Those rewritten chapters better be worth our while -_-[/quote:cc6fcfe21a]
Not really because all i've added are some new lines and scenes. It's your choice if you want to reread everything but if you've got the time then go for it. Most of the chapters i've rewritten are essentially the same but lengthier and (hopefully) more interesting than the previous stuff. They won't be up until i'm done with all of them though.
<!--QuoteBegin-ravenflau09+Feb 26 2007, 09:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td> QUOTE (ravenflau09 @ Feb 26 2007, 09:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Quote:I dunno but i've been feeling kinda weird lately. I'm sleepy most of the time, i walk listlessly around the house. Damn, i don't really know. Maybe there's just something wrong with me. I just hope this phase will pass soon.
lol buntis 
EDIT - not really, hehehe.[/quote:cc6fcfe21a]
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Oi, di naman noh! 
Weird lang ako nun. 
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I know your busy, but when do the next chapters come out? 
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<!--QuoteBegin-strawhat_luffy+Mar 6 2007, 11:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td> QUOTE (strawhat_luffy @ Mar 6 2007, 11:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I know your busy, but when do the next chapters come out? [/quote:60150fc2b7]
Check back in around four or so days. Just finished the last few parts of "Chasing the wind" and that chapter is in the editing stages. That and i'm still going to have to email it to Alucard after i'm done editing it. So give or take around four days for it to be up.
BTW, that requests you had about adding a certain someone? I included him already. Tell me if its okay how i depicted the guy when the chapter's up.
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Goodness gracious great balls of fire!
Specifically, Pulverizer-destroying fireballs
Those last three chapters were incredible, action-wise. The WAFFy stuff in the first movement was okay but the real draw-in was the Pulverizer fight. I
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Nabuhay ka rin, ungas ka.
Seriously, its okay that you've been gone a while. Schoolwork does take precedence over pleasure. Thanks for the review though. Improvement? You give me too much credit dude. 
A heads-up on the fic: I've taken down the first eight chapters, seeing as how they're the ones that'll get most heavily affected by the rewriting i've been doing. To those who've read the stor before, no need to worry. All i'm doing is some editing of the scenes and adding a few more since i noticed that most of the early chapters are rather short and boring. Don't worry as the overall content won't be changed at all.
And the next chapter isn't going anywhere for now. That prereader of mine hasn't got around to perusing the email yet, wih his thesis and all that. Sorry for the delay. 
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Kuya astig ung fic mo , when will you post the rewritten chapters, nabitin kc me knina
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Bitin ba? Hehehe, sorry ha, halos ala kasi akong oras para mag-update eh, daming inaasekaso na papeles.
Glad to hear you liked the fic, Chaos. Sorry to disappoint you with the missing chapters but i hope they'll all be finished before Holy Week arrives. I'll be posting Chapter Twenty-Three along with them when everything settles down.
Pasensya na hah?
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Papeles, yeah right <_<
It looks like you've gained a new reader. You had better make good on that posting sked of yours and make us both happy or I'll be sending Naru-punches your way.
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I hate your big dumb combat boots And the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick — It even makes me rhyme.
I hate the way you're always right. I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh — Even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it that you're not around. And the fact that you didn't call.
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actually nagbabasa din po ako pero di ko matuloy kasi raming parteng nawawala eh >_< astig nung storya!!!
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Thanks Clonezero, glad you enjoyed the still-unfinished story.
To the readers, pasensya na about taking down the earlier chapters but i promise that the first of the new stuff will be up and readable by Easter Sunday. Hey, i can't really work on the story all the time as i do have other responsibilities. Just chill and read the other fics for now.
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What the feth is a Naru punch anyway? 
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What the feth is a Naru punch anyway?
ever read Love Hina? lol.
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Listen to the captain, it looks like he knows more about these things than you do.
Don't tell me you've never watched Love Hina? A Naru-Punch is what she does to Keitaro at least once every episode. All those punches usually end up with him being sent into orbit. I had thought that you were even more of an otaku than I was. Maybe I was wrong.
So can you give us an idea on what to expect with the new chapters? At least something to make us look forward to them.
I hate the way you talk to me. And the way you cut your hair.
I hate the way you drive my car. I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots And the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick — It even makes me rhyme.
I hate the way you're always right. I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh — Even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it that you're not around. And the fact that you didn't call.
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you — Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.
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Before you pass out any judgment on me, let me say that i do know a bit about Love Hina but i haven't progressed very far into the series, as i've only watched the first five episodes. After those, i never got around to watching the rest since Hero jumbled up their skeds. I do have the intro song in my collection though: one of the more "pang-kulit" songs along with "Sobakasu" from Rurouni Kenshin's soundtrack. Hey, if you want, i can borrow the series and watch it this Holy Week.
New chapters or the rewritten ones? If you really need to know, all i can say is that i've made Hitomi even more annoying and bitchy in the earlier chapters. A niggling thought i've been having since the thirteenth chapter was that she made the switch from "hell's bitch" to an angel too abruptly, so i threw in some additional scenes that showcase just how in hell she got that reputation of hers. Also, i added several flashbacks from their time in the Ark as well as a flashback of their first meeting.
Aside from those, Chapter Twenty-Three will throw the two into the first real challenge of their relationship. Something that most couples will eventually have to face..
But i'm not gonna say anything about it, you're just gonna hafta wait until its up.  )
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Hey idiot, you do realize that you said you'd post the rewrites on easter sunday. I thought they were supposed to be posted just before palm sunday? So which sunday is it gonna be?
I hate the way you talk to me. And the way you cut your hair.
I hate the way you drive my car. I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots And the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick — It even makes me rhyme.
I hate the way you're always right. I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh — Even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it that you're not around. And the fact that you didn't call.
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you — Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.
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he'll get them up when he gets them up.
or when he feels like it for that matter. Right Fox?
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