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RE: i can still draw!!!!! - atdsutm - 01-19-2011
![[Image: IMG-1.jpg]](http://i258.photobucket.com/albums/hh263/atdsutm/Ting%20works/IMG-1.jpg)
for some reason the scanner scaned it and stretched it a bit
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - azuriel07 - 01-19-2011
Looks fine to me. Although the way she handles the rifle is kinda odd.
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - atdsutm - 01-19-2011
where exactly?
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - Shintetsu - 01-19-2011
Her left forearm is a bit too long? Otherwise, she's hawt.
Edit: No wait, her arm is too long, not her forearm? Bah, the clothes are making an optical lulz of my eyes!
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - atdsutm - 01-19-2011
i told you its a bit "stretched", but anyways i think i need to practice adding clothes while not skiping drawing the anatomy i can already see my fault
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - TMRaven - 01-19-2011
(01-19-2011, 12:07 AM)atdsutm Wrote:
for some reason the scanner scaned it and stretched it a bit
Marina from Valkyria Chronicles?
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - azuriel07 - 01-19-2011
Well, If I were on standby mode and have my rifle with me. I'd lower it down a bit where it's practically pointed at the ground. (It's like it's still aiming at something.) Oh~ and finger's outside the trigger guard.
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - atdsutm - 01-19-2011
@mom
uhm no, i created a self made sniper who is female and wears blue uniform. she likes cute doggy pets and is introverted and prefers to be alone. her skills are ultimate accuracy and lone wolf :3
@azuriel07
yeah i think i need to have more references than just looking at the gun
edIT: after checking it a bit, it wasn't stretched after all, (i think i unconsciously just made her really tall and no wonder her arms look a bit long, because i base it on the body proportion
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - TMRaven - 01-20-2011
Oh ok, so basically Marina. I don't really see any elongated arms like anybody else (they might be thrown off by the outline of the sleeve itself, which is baggy enough to not show a prominent bend), but I do see some weird angles in which things in the pic stand out though. I agree that the angle of the gun is not realistic. It should be more relaxed, and pointing downward. On the contrary, her right arm is bent too far inwards over itself. If you bend your own arm inwards for just a second, you'll see it's quite impossible for it to double over itself so much. This is giving her right arm in the photo a "rubber" look to it. You can either fix that by giving her arm a less sharp bend to it, or adjusting the angle such that the biceps of her right arm are pointed towards the viewer.
Lastly, I think the face doesn't really make for a good looking woman. It might be your filipino tastes differing from my own, however. I do know there are some pudgy looking filipino girls with similar face structures and flat looking eyes that are considered to look good. (Which is why I presume that Edy girl is the most popular in Japan, even though I think she looks like a 5 year old) I would personally prefer a face with less chubbiness to it, with a much more prominent bone structure and making the eyes less thick. That should make her face look less flat looking.
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - atdsutm - 01-20-2011
@your mom
you could give me some example of what style you prefer, i can try to emulate them.
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - iraya-sama - 01-20-2011
i can give you a style...but it involves two men in love
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - azuriel07 - 01-21-2011
(01-20-2011, 01:25 PM)iraya-sama Wrote: i can give you a style...but it involves two men in love
What "syle" to be exact?
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - iraya-sama - 01-21-2011
(01-21-2011, 12:04 AM)azuriel07 Wrote:(01-20-2011, 01:25 PM)iraya-sama Wrote: i can give you a style...but it involves two men in love
What "syle" to be exact?
DOGGY STYLE
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - Fox - 01-21-2011
You had to ask... you just had to ask for it.
RE: i can still draw!!!!! - zero_kanipan - 01-21-2011
(01-21-2011, 06:07 AM)Fox Wrote: You had to ask... you just had to ask for it.
of course he did. he prolly wants to be one of the participants XD