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RE: i need your comments :3 - J.E_Magog - 05-14-2010

You can draw better than my crush lol. Just practice more on anatomy. Fave the pic with large white spaces for me.


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TOOOL!

RE: i need your comments :3 - Serene - 05-20-2010

Same with JE's. That and proportion. Just those and you're closer to getting there.

Sugoi-desu~!

RE: i need your comments :3 - Pinkitteee - 05-22-2010

thanks, srry I cant contribute to RR manga tho, I'm still a newbie :<

RE: i need your comments :3 - Pinkitteee - 06-02-2010

[Image: a09fv6.jpg]

latest drawing first time using Paint tool sai, took me alot of hours thinking how to color this .

RE: i need your comments :3 - clonezero - 06-02-2010

and you did right! nice! XD

RE: i need your comments :3 - Lord_Leperman - 06-02-2010

Actually looks okay. There's just a bit of awkwardness with her pose that I can't put my finger on, but you did really well Big grin.

Nice coloring too btw. :p

RE: i need your comments :3 - Sforza - 06-02-2010

I like the coloring Smile

Try using character's shoulder width = 2.5x head width to keep things proportioned.

RE: i need your comments :3 - Pinkitteee - 06-02-2010

o,right, i didnt notice that and I just thought somthn' was wrong with teh drawing but ignored it xD thanks btw, ima try doin' the background next. Smile thanks guys!

RE: i need your comments :3 - Shintetsu - 06-02-2010

See? Now you've learned about proportions from RR, nowhere else!
instead of me just saying that there's something wrong with it :|

RR is waaay better than dev, less posers, more constructive criticism and help. Thanks for posting creative comments guys!

you're helping me too, you see. Ninja

RE: i need your comments :3 - Grim - 06-02-2010

That's some pretty darn sharp coloring right there.

RE: i need your comments :3 - Pinkitteee - 06-03-2010

pls help me on coloring Blush

[Image: 2myp9n4.jpg]

RE: i need your comments :3 - atdsutm - 06-03-2010

(06-02-2010, 01:25 PM)Shintetsu Wrote: you're helping me too, you see. Ninja

lol i understand now

anyways your coloring is great, and some improvement in anatomy

some basics i use are:

eye lids should be inline

hand size is approximately the same as face size (facepalm)

feet length = head height

female base body = upside down triangle with the lower edge as vagina

male base body = trapezoid

shoulder width = x2 head width (female) x3 or less (male) depends if person is broad shoulders

tip of elbow = end of ribs

draw nude before clothing although nude is fine. Rofl

always have a good reference (hentai pictures) and always try to think that your drawing SUCKS (im not kidding) always looks for bad parts of your drawing and try to be better at those weaknesses.

RE: i need your comments :3 - NiX - 06-03-2010

Another interesting way of "checking" the proportions of your drawing is by looking at its mirror image. I'm not quite sure why, but it really works.

RE: i need your comments :3 - Pinkitteee - 06-03-2010

@NiX. I do that too, helpd me chek if the size of the feet is right =]]
@atdsutm . I think I suck at drawing. I stopd drawing last 2years that's why my skill didn't levl up Smile) but thanks for the proportion info, I did that and it helpd xDD LOL

RE: i need your comments :3 - iraya-sama - 06-03-2010

i think her drawing are good!!!!

Pro tip: the space between the eyes should be one eye Happy like in smiley faces
but overall your anatomy is good
i dont follow too many guideline i just think of drawing girls as drawing sausages-- kinda roundish and filled with soft curves --these apply to men too, only the main body is kinda boxy but the rest are sausages..

sexy delicious sausages.....

*ehem*
id also like to say that you drew your characters legs and feet very beautifully. you have a certain artstyle that you should follow on and styalize more.
your eyes are very pretty, it doesent have to be always inlined, what ever makes it prettier, then do it.

also her breasts-- try to look for how to draw breasts on the internet, like porn and stuff. XD