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with proper formatting.
Samara
03-12-2010, 07:02 AM
Please critique and discuss the Nemesis story here. Its not my work but I do edit some of the writing, so please if you have any pointers share them here with me thanks.
iraya-sama
03-16-2010, 12:45 PM
i think you should edit most parts of the story as it is quite confusing at times...
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