Good start. Try to steady the shots of your work though.
You might also want to color in one direction so the whole thing looks much cleaner and more composed.
I guess I have the same comment as what
theGrim just said. Nice lineart though. :p
And yeah, if you want the images to pop out at once, better use:
Code:
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