12-14-2007, 12:19 AM
I gotta hand it to you dude. This is better than most of the stuff posted on ACO.
Stylistically, almost every frame is consistent with the look you want to achieve. You've got some good use of scale and perspective on some of the parts, especially when you have full body shots of the ACs (which again, look consistent - great job). Characters have some good movement in them, like in that hand-to-hand fight bit. You went a bit heavy on the shading, but it's alright.
Story-wise, it's pretty decent so far, although at this point it's still introducing characters.
Again, I'd ask you to ink them digitally so as to produce cleaner and more defined lines. But hey, either way, great so far.
Stylistically, almost every frame is consistent with the look you want to achieve. You've got some good use of scale and perspective on some of the parts, especially when you have full body shots of the ACs (which again, look consistent - great job). Characters have some good movement in them, like in that hand-to-hand fight bit. You went a bit heavy on the shading, but it's alright.
Story-wise, it's pretty decent so far, although at this point it's still introducing characters.
Again, I'd ask you to ink them digitally so as to produce cleaner and more defined lines. But hey, either way, great so far.
"Let's fight... like gentlemen." - Dudley, SF3
