10-30-2007, 07:06 AM
Nice start!
The suits for the Ravens look sleek enough without being too Gundam pilot-like. And Eagles look like they're SWAT or something. As for the ACs, I know this isn't the time to ink them in yet so they're fine for the time being. Good stuff.
You said you wanted to go more than 10 chapters. How long is each one? The only thing stopping you from finishing this is if you make it too long and you lose interest in the middle of the project, like NiX said. Because of that, I'd advice you to begin on the manga as soon as you can, like when you have a solid outline for all your chapters.
The suits for the Ravens look sleek enough without being too Gundam pilot-like. And Eagles look like they're SWAT or something. As for the ACs, I know this isn't the time to ink them in yet so they're fine for the time being. Good stuff.
You said you wanted to go more than 10 chapters. How long is each one? The only thing stopping you from finishing this is if you make it too long and you lose interest in the middle of the project, like NiX said. Because of that, I'd advice you to begin on the manga as soon as you can, like when you have a solid outline for all your chapters.
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