10-28-2007, 10:51 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-06-2007, 10:09 PM by R.Leonhardt.)
I don't know if this is the place where I should put this but oh well.
The thread's purpose is to ask for help in a manga I'm planning to make. Because truthfully,I want to make a manga but I'm not a good writer.
Plot:
(somehow Based on the Philippine history.....)
Once a peaceful country,the nation *I don't know the name yet* is now under the control of an ever so powerful empire which took hold of the government,resources and markets,driving people into lives of harsh labor just to keep food on the table .It was a death of a hero that gave rise to the country's people. Being motivated by that incident, a group was formed to fight back. The battle was fierce,and although the soldiers put up a fight,it was futile,the empire was too strong for them,too large for a small group to confront. Because of their dilemma,they are enforced by allied forces which greatly increased their chances of surviving. But even with this much force,the situation is still critical....
The forces:
EAGLE- The country's military. Armed with early generation weaponry,they are left with only their minds to rely on.
RAVENS- a group of discharged soldiers from the army because of disobedience and other military faults. Even though they are discharged,they are elites,they disobey because they do things their way. They are mercenaries hired by the army to execute risk taking missions. The ones behind the country's initial success and the ones responsible to why the country can still stand.
Allied forces- Nations that provides back up. Nations like a US based fictional country.
Empire-a fictional empire based on the old Spanish empire which was once considered to be one of the best colony
Characters are soon to come,I'm still sketching them,I might include Sophy lol.
just give me some ideas to improve the plot or the overall story
The thread's purpose is to ask for help in a manga I'm planning to make. Because truthfully,I want to make a manga but I'm not a good writer.
Plot:
(somehow Based on the Philippine history.....)
Once a peaceful country,the nation *I don't know the name yet* is now under the control of an ever so powerful empire which took hold of the government,resources and markets,driving people into lives of harsh labor just to keep food on the table .It was a death of a hero that gave rise to the country's people. Being motivated by that incident, a group was formed to fight back. The battle was fierce,and although the soldiers put up a fight,it was futile,the empire was too strong for them,too large for a small group to confront. Because of their dilemma,they are enforced by allied forces which greatly increased their chances of surviving. But even with this much force,the situation is still critical....
The forces:
EAGLE- The country's military. Armed with early generation weaponry,they are left with only their minds to rely on.
RAVENS- a group of discharged soldiers from the army because of disobedience and other military faults. Even though they are discharged,they are elites,they disobey because they do things their way. They are mercenaries hired by the army to execute risk taking missions. The ones behind the country's initial success and the ones responsible to why the country can still stand.
Allied forces- Nations that provides back up. Nations like a US based fictional country.
Empire-a fictional empire based on the old Spanish empire which was once considered to be one of the best colony
Characters are soon to come,I'm still sketching them,I might include Sophy lol.
just give me some ideas to improve the plot or the overall story
