12-04-2006, 05:01 PM
Okay, call them spoilers if you want. Whatever floats your boat. 
And don't get the wrong ideas. Jaden and Hitomi haven't fallen in love yet. No "I love you"s have been said yet. If you'll read Chapter 13 again, what Hitomi said was "Jaden, I...you.". Nope, those weren't the three words. I"m not saying what it really was. I'll just leave it to your imaginations.
It'll be a long time before they can say those words to each other. With what I've got planned in mind, when the words do finally come out, things will get worse before they get better.
I've posted Chapter 14 already. My pre-reader hasn't given his comments on Chapter 15 yet so it's still not up. I hope to get the results by tonight.
For now, enjoy Chapter 14. If i were you guys, i'd get a hanky ready 'cause there was one part during the time I was writing Chapter 14 that I began to cry. Yep, I'm a guy and I actually cried at something i've written.
Happy reading!
@Doom Trigger
Your proposal seems interesting. Why don't you talk to the other guys and we'll see what can come out of it.
@Necron
I already talked to Lunar about the collaboration thing. I told her i'd rather have her as a reviewer. Sorry.
@Lunar
With the long update times between chapters (and my laziness) i'd say it'll take around nine months or more to finish all three books. Although I hope it really won't take that long
And don't get the wrong ideas. Jaden and Hitomi haven't fallen in love yet. No "I love you"s have been said yet. If you'll read Chapter 13 again, what Hitomi said was "Jaden, I...you.". Nope, those weren't the three words. I"m not saying what it really was. I'll just leave it to your imaginations.
It'll be a long time before they can say those words to each other. With what I've got planned in mind, when the words do finally come out, things will get worse before they get better.
I've posted Chapter 14 already. My pre-reader hasn't given his comments on Chapter 15 yet so it's still not up. I hope to get the results by tonight.
For now, enjoy Chapter 14. If i were you guys, i'd get a hanky ready 'cause there was one part during the time I was writing Chapter 14 that I began to cry. Yep, I'm a guy and I actually cried at something i've written.
Happy reading!
@Doom Trigger
Your proposal seems interesting. Why don't you talk to the other guys and we'll see what can come out of it.
@Necron
I already talked to Lunar about the collaboration thing. I told her i'd rather have her as a reviewer. Sorry.
@Lunar
With the long update times between chapters (and my laziness) i'd say it'll take around nine months or more to finish all three books. Although I hope it really won't take that long
"May those who accept their fate find happiness. May those who defy their fate find glory."
